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If you're an admissions officer, a typical day might look something
like this: over your mug of morning coffee, you're peering at a stack
of hundreds—maybe thousands—of applications from students
from all over the world. You consider SATs, GPAs, and other acronyms
to determine some of the strongest candidates. After the numbers are
crunched, who will catch your eye and hold your interest? Sometimes
even the straight-A student/captain of the hockey team/organizer of
a program at a homeless shelter won't make the cut—unless,
of course, he or she knows how to paint a self-portrait using an essay
that leaves an impression in the reader's mind.
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Assess your options for the essay question. Most colleges and universities provide specific questions to direct
your essay writing. You may be asked to consider how a particular
experience or person has influenced you or to explain why a specific
issue is important to you. Whether you decide to explain your interest
in environmental causes or illustrate the impact of an inspirational
volunteer experience, choose the question that feels most approachable
based on your personal experiences.
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Get to the heart of the question. Read the question several times, underlining what you are being asked
to do. Be careful to determine what is being asked, address the question
directly, and elaborate with interesting experiences. The question
choices are offered so that admissions officers can get to know you
better, but you must be sure to be specific in your approach. Do not
educate the reader on the importance of human rights issues if the
question asks how volunteering has changed you
or impacted the person you have become. Be specific
in tackling their question so that your experience can speak for you.
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Start rough and then refine. First
organize your thoughts around your topic and outline important points.
Start with a draft that captures your feelings and images, then edit
to make it lucid and refined. Revising for content, making changes,
and reorganizing your thoughts will enhance the quality of your writing,
so be sure that your essay includes:
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| an introduction with a clearly stated thesis that answers
the question; |
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| body paragraphs with key points to support your thesis; |
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| a solid conclusion that does not simply restate your points,
but also leaves a compelling image in the reader's mind. |
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Reduce, reuse, recycle. It's okay
to revise one essay for more than one school. Some essay topics and
questions are flexible enough that you can tailor your essay for more
than one application. Just remember that the essay is your chance
to let a school know the things about you that fit with the things
you like about them. Reflect not just on who you are right now, but
on who you wish to become through your experiences at a particular
school.
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Don't forget the finishing touches. Type the essay. Check the spelling. Correct the margins and punctuation.
After you have read and reread your essay, you may feel too close
to it to catch any missing commas. Show it to some objective observers,
like counselors, parents, and teachers, who will see it with fresh
eyes. They will see it for the first time, just as an admissions officer
will. This part may seem like a drill, but you want your thoughtfully
written words to be presented in a neat package. The chance to use
your voice expertly is a gift. Give it to the college of your choice
so that they can open it carefully. If it is one that they remember,
it is a gift that will bring many happy returns.
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